Ray, now in his sixties, had been fixing cars for forty-five years, and most days he thought he’d seen it all — burnt clutches, bent rims, impatient city drivers who thought a hammer could replace a socket set. But lately, he’d started noticing other things instead. The way the light came through the workshop windows in the morning. The creak of the roller door. The smell of oil that had seeped into the concrete so deeply it would outlast him.
Retirement was only a few months away. He told everyone he was looking forward to it — more fishing, more time with his grandkids, maybe finally finishing that old Morris Minor sitting under a tarp out back. But the truth was, he wasn’t sure he wanted to stop. Fixing things was all he’d ever known.
That Thursday morning, the air had that sharp chill you get before the day turns clear. He’d been about to close up early when the phone rang — a mate from the tyre shop down the road saying there was a delivery mix-up. Ray muttered something about “bloody suppliers” and decided to drive out himself. He grabbed his tools just in case.
That’s how he ended up on the coastal road near Dromana when he spotted the ute — bonnet up, steam rising, a bloke standing beside it with his hands on his hips. The girl sitting on the tailgate looked about twelve, patient but disappointed.
Ray slowed. Something about the scene tugged at him. He’d seen it before, in a dozen different forms — a man trying to keep it together while the world threw him one more delay.
He pulled over.
“Need a hand?”
The roofer — Dave, he said his name was — looked tired in that way that goes beyond lack of sleep. The kind of tired you carry in your shoulders. The ute’s radiator was shot to hell, no question.
“Cooked,” Ray said, tapping the cracked seam with a screwdriver. “You’re not driving this anywhere.”
Dave swore under his breath and rubbed the back of his neck. “Figures. We’re supposed to catch the ferry in forty minutes.”
Ray glanced at the girl, Mia. She was pretending not to listen, earbuds in but eyes fixed on them. He saw the way she watched her dad — like she knew he’d been trying hard lately, but wasn’t sure why he was always so far away.
Ray felt a pang of something familiar. Guilt, maybe. Recognition.
“Tell you what,” he said, “I’ll tow you to my shop in Rye. Get you sorted tomorrow. Might even get you to that ferry if we move quick.”
The look on Dave’s face said he didn’t believe it, but he agreed anyway.
They drove with the windows cracked open, the sea air filling the cab. Dave talked a bit about roofing, about running his own crew in Melbourne. Ray listened, nodding, throwing in the odd story about his own younger years — the long days, the missed dinners, the quiet drive home to kids who were already asleep.
He didn’t mean to say it, but it slipped out: “You know, blokes like us — we get good at working hard, but we forget what we’re working for.”
Dave didn’t answer right away. He just looked out the window, watching the waves. And for a while, neither of them spoke.
Ray thought about his own daughter, Claire — the one who used to wait up for him, even on school nights. She’d sit on the couch until he came home from the shop, eyes drooping, homework forgotten. He used to tell her, “Go to bed, love, I’ll see you in the morning.”
She’d nod, and sometimes she’d say, “You said that yesterday.”
She was forty now, with kids of her own. Lived up in Sydney. Called him every Sunday, even though he didn’t always know what to say.
When they reached the ferry terminal, the clock on the dash read 11:59. Perfect timing.
“Go on,” Ray said, waving them toward the ramp. “You’ve got just enough time to make it.”

Dave grinned, grabbed his daughter’s hand, and ran.
Ray stayed in the van, watching as they boarded. He saw the girl lean over the railing, hair whipping in the wind, laughing at something her dad said. The ferry horn sounded, deep and low, rolling across the bay.
He felt something loosen in his chest.
That night, Ray drove home slower than usual. The road along the foreshore was nearly empty, the sky streaked orange and pink. He passed the marina, the fish and chip shop, the caravan park — all the little pieces of the Peninsula that had filled his life for decades.
When he pulled into his driveway, he sat there for a minute before cutting the engine. The house was quiet, the porch light still flickering like it had for years.
He poured himself a beer and took it out back, where the smell of engine grease seemed to follow him no matter how much he scrubbed. He thought about the roofer and his daughter — about that look of relief when they made it aboard. It was a good feeling to know that he had a small part on making their trip to Queenscliff Beach happen.
He wondered if Dave would remember him in a few years. Maybe not. But that didn’t matter.
Because Ray would remember them.
The man who reminded him of himself. The little girl who reminded him of what time really cost.
He took a slow sip of beer, listening to the crickets and the distant sound of waves against the shore.
“Maybe it’s time,” he murmured.
And for the first time in a long while, the thought of retirement didn’t scare him. It felt right — like easing the clutch after a long day, letting the engine finally rest.



